Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Soaring



I saw you today, a hawk's wings upon the wind. And you were free.


8 comments:

  1. short and sweet. that's all anyone needs. i like it.

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  2. Thanks. :) I was running an errand during work and saw a hawk, this immediately came to mind.

    (The words are mine, the photo isn't).

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  3. oh, but do you know for sure that it was free?
    or maybe its just your perception?
    perhaps it was not so free after all,
    bound to the world always, by gravity.
    and tethered in place with our awe..
    ....

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  4. Hi Barry! Thanks for inspiring me to write about me and Mon. It's been very cathartic. Very freeing. :)

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  5. Thanks That Girl!


    With Blogger acting up the past 24 hours or so I lost a couple comments, so I'll repost now.

    Gypsy said, "Hi Barry! Thanks for inspiring me to write about me and Mon. It's been very cathartic. Very freeing. :)"

    @Heather- Glad I was able to inspire you. It's been a truly amazing read.

    Sweet Pea said, "oh, but do you know for sure that it was free? or maybe its just your perception? perhaps it was not so free after all, bound to the world always, by gravity.
    and tethered in place with our awe.."

    @Sweet Pea- Hmm, now you have me thinking. Suddenly my brain hurts. :)

    Jill said, "I wanna be a bird!"

    @Jill- you wouldn't believe how many people use imagery of birds in their writing. I think we all want to be one sometime.

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  6. hahaha, "suddenly"
    i love that.
    well, i apologize for making your brain hurt. i just like to analyze things, and see things from every direction. and sometimes i just like to go against whatever is being said, just because i can =D

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