Friday, January 28, 2011

Love In The Rain- poem


I wrote this when I was twenty after a break-up. Still not sure how happy I am with it but it was one of my first...


Love In The Rain

I once walked through the rain
With a girl whose warmth
Shone through so clearly
It seemed to blow the clouds away
And made me forget the rain.

I was once loved by a girl
Whose smile was so bright,
It made me forget my troubles
Long enough
To love her back.

I once lost a girl
Whose love for me died
Along with the leaves of Autumn.

And now

Even through all the pain,
The twinkle in my eye
Is the love I feel for her.
Because in my dreams
We're still together,
Walking in the rain.


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4 comments:

  1. highheeledlifeJanuary 28, 2011 at 8:01 PM

    My friend thanks for your visits and encouraging words ... we still need to coordinate you and Sandy coming out our way...hopefully the weather will start cooperating..

    This is a beautiful poem... it is raw ... xo HHL

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  2. BarryJanuary 28, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    Thanks HHL, it's a bit surreal hearing comments on something I wrote twenty-five years ago that's barely seen the light of day.

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  3. UnknownMay 11, 2012 at 2:52 AM

    It reminds me of a high school love - both pure and innocent..thank you for bringing back memories

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  4. BarryMay 12, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    Thanks Angelina, it really was a more innocent time in my life. :)

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